Mixing issues, but good song
The song is pretty good, but the main problems are with the actual recording.
It sounds like you're recording a bit too close to the microphone when you sing. It also sounds like you either need a Pop filter, or at least least avoid singing directly into the microphone so you can avoid those "popping" noises. (an example of this is the first time you say "point" at 00:19)
You should also try singing a bit louder, but farther away from the microphone, as you come off as if you're trying not to be too loud, or as if you're not very enthusiastic (which obviously isn't the case). So singing a bit louder will probably bring out more strength in you're voice. It doesn't matter if it's too loud, since you can lower the volume later (assuming you record guitar and vocals separately)
Anyhow, that's all I really have to say. Good song.
8/10 for the song itself, not including the mixing issues.