kiiryu's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Five Dollars]

Okay

Is that realstrat?

Anyhow, doesn't feel like anything really changes all that much throughout the song, no distinct sections, just variations of the same general melody. So, not bad, just not really that interesting.

[Empty coridors]

Good

Lives up to what it's meant to be.

[Organic Walk]

weird.

The synth that comes in at 57 seems to have bad timing, and the clap is a bit blatant, if that makes any sense.

Djidkay responds:

Thanks you telling me what's wrong ^^
Making bad timings between melodys seems to be a bad habit I took, the next time i'll try to keep more attention on it ^^

[Archangel Reborn]

Slayer...fpc...(FLKeys?)

Agh, the composition is great, but the vsts aren't. Sounds like you used a lot of default FL vsts, which usually stand out to anyone who uses the program.

8/10 for the composition, which is awesome.

5/10 for the song as it is.

[Drums Of Wars]

Drums were too loud

I liked it, but I found the drums to be too loud and they stood out a bit too much, I think it would have sounded better if they had blended together with everything else, rather than being the focus.

Jephz responds:

Alright, I'll keep that in mind.

[Rolan's Curse O3]

Hmm

The beat was there, the mixing was there, but the melody just felt...bland, and the choice of instrument for the lead didn't seem to work very well.

6/10 = slightly above average, not bad.

Ragestorm responds:

Hey thanks for the quality review, I'll be making some changes based on what you said.
Wassail!

[Chaoshellshit]

Horrible

sounds like slayer..(the vst, not the band)

6/10 if this was supposed to sound terrible (based on the discription..), 0/10 if this was supposed to sound good.

5/10 because I have no idea which it is.

[Hollow Dreams]

good

Some clipping issues (too much bass?), and the drums didn't seem to fit well with certain parts. Other than that though, it was good. The melodies were good enough to keep you interested, and even though though they repeated a bit they never outstayed their welcome, smoothly transitioning into different melodies at all the right times.

8/10 not taking into the account the mixing issues. Keep up the good work.

[When Technology Rules!]

Doesen't fit

I agree with the review below me.

The intro was good, but rather than blending into the rest of it, or acting as a transition, it just sort of abruptly stoped, and we never here it again. Kind of made it feel like a different song altogether.

[Occupied Much]

Kinda empty

Kinda empty, since there were only really two instruments, and they were playing the same melody most of the time anyway. Furthermore, they were usually just playing quick notes so there were no held notes or continuous sounds throughout the song, adding to the feeling of emptiness.

Also, the drums were all over the place, with the cymbal just sort of coming in seemingly at random, and leaving at odd times, making it hard to follow a rhythm when it came to the overall song structure.

Anyhow, practice, improve, FIGHT!

DjSquanto responds:

lol, im laughing so hard xD, ok thanks.