3o3ish 3....-sigh-
Repetitive, boring, and it looks like you even used the default kick and hat sounds that are there when you start FL, and of course anyone who uses FL is probably going to instant;y recognize the 3o3ish 3 preset from sytrus.
However, don't let it get you down, can't say my first songs looked much different. First thing's first, you should go look for some vsts, or at least work on making the built in one's less recognizable.
Just keep practicing and you'll do fine.