kiiryu's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[NSP - Tetrisness]

I think...

I think you should use something other than default FL vsts. They're a bit too recognizable. That's more of a personal thing, though.

As for the song itself, try adding a bid more variation when remixing a song. Simply replacing the instruments often comes of as a bit boring.

[- Smooth -]

Ugghh....

Another good song, another score that's way too low...

Great mix of instruments and styles. Makes me think of some sort of stealth mission in the middle of the night.

[All I Know (is what you show)]

Pretty good.

Really? I didn't find the vocals all that shaky..

But yeah, the guitar was pretty damn good. Great job.

BelligerentF responds:

Appreciate the listen, I did put some time into this one.

[STE-002]

!!!!

Wwwaayyy too loud man. I can understand playing loud when you record it, but you really need to turn down the volume. Even if it's just messing around.

[Rise Of the Punknight]

Damn.

How the hell is the score below 4 right now? Wow...

Amazing work.

BERSERKYD responds:

hahaha thanks man... the first 10 vote always suck.. i dont know why, i suppose that douchebag look at the new submissions and give 0 to anything, Just because they're stupid Fag ! Yeah I think its a good song, fuck them Raaawww XD

Thanks a lot for the review !

[(Guitar) String Thing]

Haha...

The drums seem off...and everything has this sort of unsteady beat to it. But Oddly enough, it works for some reason and gives it a strange touch of light hearted humor..

[Face Broken By Hard Object]

Good

Not bad, my only complaint would be that the cymbal sounds off for whatever reason. (Though I don't know what it is specifically..)

[Can you guess this song?]

well..

No clue what the hell it is, but it sounds good.

Tekkom responds:

Yeah its a tricky one. HINT:It's from an album that was released recently. ;)

[The Arrival Part 1]

Too loud

Seems a bit loud for ambient music, that is, not very atmospheric. Work on switching up the velocity of your notes a bit, not every note has to be so loud.

You should also try and include some more subtle sounds, quiet melodies here and there playing alongside the more audible sounds. Stuff like that.

BowserThedestructive responds:

Eh here's my reasoning I am not going to follow the normal guideline It can go in the trash by ambient I mean frequency ambient not melodic ambient a tune this is to not be a tune only a resonant frequency tone.

Also has I said part 2 will have a lot better editing done to it. Also its not suppose to be quite its suppose to be both which it is. I maybe should have rephrased the description

Its ambient tones Not Ambient Music =3